"Life of Sparklepaw" -- by nine year old scribb

guys
ok so for the longest period of my life, i wanted to be an author (i lowkey still do but have 0 motivation so)
when i was nine?? i wrote this as a super addition to this other book i was "writing"
and i just found it again
and im going to post it in chapters because i want to share this masterpiece with you all
so this is going to be word for word, and occasionally i'll make author's notes to explain things (since this was a super addition)
authors notes will be in parenthesis and bold
let's get this started

Life of Sparklepaw

by nine-year-old Scribb

Chapter #1

A grey-blue she-kit peered though the mist. She could see the faint outline of a cat walking toward her. Then the sun appeared, shining on the remaining mist that was still one paw-hight high. The sun shone brightly, showing a yong grey-blue tom. A warrior of another clan. the she-cat thought. Besides her loilty to her clan, she felt something tingle in her heart when she looked at him.
"What do you want?" She hissed.
"We are closer then you think." The yong tom said soothingly. His body slowly fadded out in the growing mist.
"Wait! I want to know more!" She hissed running after him. "Wait!"


She awoke in the warm walls of the nersory. She pressed her muzzle against her mothers side. She streched and padded out side. She was five and three quarter moons old, so she could go out of the nersury unsupervised. 
"Sparklekit!" hissed a voice. Sparklekit spun around to see Whiskerkit, her rival.
"Whiskerkit, What are you doing out here alone? You're only moons old!"
"Stop treating me like you're my mentor!" he hissed.
"Neh, Neh, Neh, Neh, Ney, Ney, Ny." Sparklekit teased.
"What's going on here?" asked Midnightflower, Whiskerkits mother.
"Sparklekit's out here without being sooper-vised!" Whiskerkit taddled.
"Well she can do that, tomarow night she's going to be an Apprentice!"
Whiskerkit frowned, and went back into the nersery. Sparklekit dipped her head in thanks. Midnightflower dipped her head before padding back into the nersery. Sparklekit watched her go, and padded toward the entrance of the Worriors' den.
"I wonder who will be my mentor." Sparklekit murmured, then yawned. It was almost dawn. She should be getting back to the nersery. Sparklekit imagened going into the nersery and fell into a deep sleep.


Sparklekit awoke outside the Worriors den. She felt emmberesed that she fell asleep there then in the nersery. She scrambled up and padded to Raven's den. Raven is a tom medicen cat. He was one of Sparklekit's closest friends.
"Raven? You here?" Sparklekit called through the echoing den made out of tree roots.
"He's out collecting herbs." Replied Moon, the medicen cat Apprentice. Moon was one of three cats sent by Starclan that was born in Starclan to gaurd Thunderfoot - Thunderpaw then - when he was just an Apprentice. (ok i feel like i should explain; the "main series" that this was supposed to be a special edition of followed the main character Thunderpaw/Thunderfoot. it was the stereotypical "outsider to leader" story, except he was from a different clan originally and fell in love with a cat from a different clan, etc. etc. also, the four clans are ones i made up, and i think they are "lightningclan", "snowclan", and then some clans for fire and water. i don't remember. anyways, back to the story!) Raven had fallen in love with Moon yet Medicen cats couldn't have kits. Sparklekit nodded.
"Where's Comet and Star?" she asked. Comet and Star were the other two cats sent. Comet had started clan life as an Apprentice yet now he's a Brave Worrior. Star started clan life as a Worrior yet now he has joined the Elders. Moon, Comet, and Star are siblings.
"Comet's enjoying the sun while it lastests, Star's gwnawing on rabbit bones while gossiping with Lonfur."
Sparklekit nodded again and serched for Comet. She spotted him talking with Thunderfoot. She bounded toward them. It's easy to find him because of his comet blue fur. She thought.
"Hi Comet. Hi Thunderfoot" She meowed.
"Hi sparklekit. I hear you're going to be an apprentice tonight." Thunderpaw comented.
Sparklekit sat up proud and was about to say something, but something burst into the clearing.
"A Twoleg!" Grasspaw spat. Grasspaw was Crookedstar's son (aka the evil leader after the good leader (*cough*bluestar copy*cough* died), and although his name is "Grass"paw he looks just like his father. Sparklekit has heard many stories about the power-thirsty cat, and how Thunderfoot saved the clan by killed him out of greif because Crookedstar killed Thunderfoot's foster mother Dottedflower. Grasspaw's nothing like Crookedstar. She thought. Though she had never lived to see him - which she was glad - from stories she could tell. She ran towared the nersery and coward on the ground. She felt a pelt and looked up to see her big brother comferting her. Sparklekit knew that he would fight all of Starclan for her. A rule of the clan was siblings about the same age had to become Apprentices together, so he had delaid becoming an Apprentice for a moon.
"It'll be okay." His soothing mew sounded by her ear. Suddenly a yowl of pain filled the air unlike any cats. Sparklekit peeked out of the hanging vines and saw the twoleg on the ground, dead. "Stay close." her brother warned.
"Stop treating me like a kit!" She growled. Then relizing she was a kit and he was just concerned about her She meowed, "Sorry..."
He nodded.
"What'll we do?" Frostpaw's high pitched mew came from the crowd.
"With the body? Easy. Leave it out for the ravens'!" Sparklekit turned to see Oakpelt walking toward everyone with Speklednose folowing him. Oakpelt is leader but he hasn't jorneyed to moonstone yet to earn his nine lives as well as the "Star" in his name. He was right, to. if you leave a dead body out in the middle of camp ravens' will take it. Oakpelt gustured with his tail for Sparklekit and her brother to follow him.
Sparkleit hurried after her brother on the high rock.
Oakpelt had no need to call the clan, as everyone had gathered already.
"Cats of my clan." He began. "We have two cats who will be named as Apprentices." He put his chin on Sparklekits brothers sholder. "By the powers of Starclan, Shine down on this kit and make him an Apprentice! Until he joins the worriors he will be named Twistedpaw!" The name suited him as her brother had his right front-paw twisted facing him.
"Lightningcoat, you havn't had an Apprentice yet so I hope you'll pass down everything you learned from Pellowpelt to him." (lightningcoat was thunderfoot's bff, but i think some drama happened or something and now they're not friends anymore??) Twistedpaw padded calmly down highrock and when he passed Sparklekit, She saw unhideable exsitment. He had waited a moon for this. Oakpelt put his chin on Sparklekits sholder. "By the powers of Starclan, Shine down on this kit and make her an Apprentice! Until you have joined the Worriors, you shall be named Sparklepaw! Thunderfoot, you havn't had an Apprentice yet so I hope you'll pass down everything I taught you to her." Sparklepaw scrambled down and toched noses with Thunderfoot.
"I'm so glad you're my mentor." She whispered. She looked at Comet, who looked crushed.
"Sparklepaw! Twistedpaw! Sparklepaw! Twistedpaw!" The crowd chanted.


"Here, let me show you the best places to sleep you two." Thunderfoot offered.
"I can show my own Apprentice where to sleep!" Lightningcoat hissed.
"Any ways, come." Thunderfoot mewed as Lightningcoat and Twistedpaw slunk into darkness. "I found it good to sleep where there's more tree cover, And far from the entrance. Like... Here!" Thunderfoot mewed pointing his muzzle to a dry patch of grass. "Use leaves, moss, grass and twigs for beding."
Thunderfoot padded out and Sparklepaw closed her eyes wishing she was in the warm nersery and not going on dangerus jerneyes in the future. Then she remembered Thunderfoots words: "Every cat counts." And her mother's words.
"Every paw-step is the start of an adventure." Sparklepaw felt breathing and she opened one eye to see Twistedpaw laying by her. "Goodnight brother." She whispered.

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Well that was a journey! Over 1000 words in just the first chapter. I'm very excited to continue, and feel free to comment with some of your favorite moments and thoughts so far. I was obviously a child prodigy. ='))))))

when you lowkey just murder a human then go on with life

alrighty let's get this chapter two rolling
this should be significantly shorter, so that's nice
again, author's notes will be in parenthesis and bold

Chapter #2

Sparklepaw awoke in a dream. She saw the grey-blue tom. "I'm so proud of you." He mewled. He pushed his cheek against hers.
"Who are you and what do you mean we are closer then I think?"
"I'm Smokepelt, a Fireclan worrior, and I'm your'e brother."
"B-but my brother's Twistedpaw, and he's White with black paws!"
"Thunderfoot is also your'e brother." Smokepelt added.
"Who-who's our father?" She asked.
"That, my sister, is something youl'l need to find out."


"Wake up!" Sparklepaw jerked awake at Thunderfoots mew. "I'm going to give you a tour of the camp and taratorie, so get some fresh kill and come to me at high rock." He padded out.
Sparklepaw stretched and yawned. Note to self; No sleeping in! She thought. She padded out and saw Twistedpaw munching on a blackbird. Sparklepaw picked out a rabbit and seated herself by him.
"Mornin." Twistedpaw mewed through a mouth full.
"What are you doing today?" Asked Sparklepaw.
"Bightningcoat and I are going to patol with Shallowpeet." Sparklepaw knew he ment to say "Lightningcoat and I are going to patrol with Shallowfeet."
"Sparklepaw!" Thunderfoot called. Sparklepaw came over. "Lionpaw is joining us."


"This is the Thunderpath." Thunderfoot had given a tour of everything now.
"Well, that's it." Lionpaw murmured.
"Can we go to Fireclan?" Sparklepaw asked. Lionpaw looked stunned.
"Er... I - Longfur is proboly waiting for me." He meowed. Without waiting for an answer, he dashed back towards camp. Sparklepaw looked up at Thunderfoot with pleading eyes.
Finally, Thunderfoot sighed. "Fine." He started padding to the derection of Fireclan camp, but Sparklepaw dashed ahead by many tail-langhths. Soon, they came to the border of the two clans. Sparklepaw froze. Close to the other side of the border she saw a Fireclan patrol. With the leader. Sparklepaw shrunk to the ground so her belly could toch and held still so she looked like a rock. She flinched as she shrunk relizing the ground was very hot under her soft under-belly. She looked around for Thunderfoot and saw him laying by a lava spout so he looked like a glob of lava. (i believe fireclan lived on a volcano or something??) But apperently the leader - Firestar - noticed them.
"Er, I would like to be in peace so go back to camp." He ordered. The other Worriors left except one. "Smokepelt, leave." Firestar sighed. Smokepelt didn't move an inch. "Fine." ignoring Smokepelt, Firestar bounded toward Sparklepaw and Thunderfoot. "My kits! My kits!" He yowled. "How's Darkmist?" He asked Sparklepaw. Darkmist is Sparklepaw's and Twistedpaw's mother. "F-fine." She stamered.
As Firestar went to talk to Thunderfoot, Smokepelt came to Sparklepaw. "Hi." He meowed. "guess what? I'm Fireclan deputie!"
"Congrats!" Sparklepaw meowed her eyes sparkling. Smokepelt sighed and Sparklepaw noticed Smokepelts whiskers were white. He must be old. She thought.
"Is Firestar our father?" Smokepelt nodded.
"Come, Smokepelt." Firestar meowed and stalked off.


When they got back, Sparklepaw felt uneasy. She and Thunderfoot had rolled in fox dung to hide their scent, and Thunderfoot said he had done it a million times. (does he just always smell like fox shit or) She had asked why, and he told her a secret. Thunderfoot fell in love with a Rainclan warrior named Goldenriver and had crossed borders to see her.
    Sparklepaw waded through a pool of water trying to clean herself from the stench. She got out and shook, and bounded towared the Medicen cat den. But not to see Raven or Moon. She looked around and saw a patch of grass with a boundle of fur on it. the fur was mud brown with dark orange splatters on it. She padded towared it.
    "Oh, Kitkit..." She whispered
    Kitkit is a tom, and her best friend.
    The fur rolled over and a half destroyed face looked at her. Kitkit is about her age; so when Sparklepaw was about four moons old something terrible happened to Kitkit. He wandered out into the forest alone, and his name is Kitkit because he was always and still is so much like a kit, so he was not paying any atention when a wolf atacked him. Half his face was torn away. he only has one eye, and many scratch marks on his left side of his face. The wolf also raked it's claws down Kit's back right leg, so he limps.
    "Sparklepaw!" He mewed. They rubbed noeses. Sometimes Sparklepaw hears Whiskerkit say that Sparklepaw and Kitkit do bad things. (im crying i swear to god this was entirely innocent) Wait...
    "Oh, no!" She grownd.
    "What?"
    "Whiskerkit's becomeing an Apprentice tomarow!"

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oh man, cliffhanger
tune in tomorrow for the next chapter in the exciting story of "Life of Sparklepaw" (((((((;;

before we begin i would like to give a shoutout to ★budgie for the amazing fanart she drew

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we have been blessed

Chapter #3

They looked at each other stunned. Whiskerkit was also Kitkits rivel.
    Suddenly a dreadfull yowl full of sorrow filled the air. Kitkit stoud up and limped toward the entrance of the den with Sparklepaw trying to mach his pace.
    Sparklepaw saw when the got to the entrance Grasspaw clawing at the ground and muttering curses between yowls. Sparklepaw rushed to his side to comfert him.
    "Oh, Sparklepaw! Frostpaw's gone!" He weeped. "Oh, Frostpaw! I love you!" He yowled. Frostpaw was Grasspaws sister and they shared such a close bond it would crush Sparklepaws and Twistedpaws bond to pieces.
    "What? Frostpaws gone?" Oakpelt appeared with Speklednoes behind him. Huh? Speklednoes looks different. Sparklepaw thought. Yes. Speklednoes' belly was swollen. Wait. She's having kits?
    "Yes!" Grasspaws hiss breaked her thoughts. "Twolegs!" He spat.
    "Oh, I'm so sorry!" Sparklepaw whispered. She looked up and saw Raven talking to Oakpelt and Oakpelt looked up at Kitkit every once and a while.
    He leaped apon the high rock and yowled in a clear voice, "Cats who are old enough to catch their own pry gather around the high rock!" He blinked at Kitkit. "Now, this cat has waited so long to be come an Apprentice," Sparklepaw saw Whiskerkit sit up straight. "And he desurves it. Kitkit ,come." Kitkit padded up. Oakpelt rested his chin on Kitkits sholder. "So by the powers of Starclan, shine down on this Kit and make him an Apprentice! From this day until you join the Warriors, You shall be named Kitpaw. Smallfoot, you mentor him." Sparklepaw bounded towared him.
    "Kitpaw! Kitpaw!" She noticed Whisperkit go over to his mother and mewl hungerly, but he could not be heard. Sparklepaw smiled. Whiskerkit never be comes ignored.


"Sleep by me!" Sparklepaw urged Kitpaw.
"Well, where do you sleep?"
"He-" Sparklepaw got cut of by seeing Twistedpaw rub noeses with Snowpaw. "re."
    "Uh, Sparklepaw? I'd like to speak with you alone." Sparklepaw nodded to Kitpaw and padded somewhere else with Twistedpaw. "Um... How to put this... Uh, I would Um... Like to sleep with Snowpaw instead!" He blurt out. "And one other thing... Uh... Um... About you and... Um... Kitpaw-"
"What about me and Kitpaw? Can't I take care of myself!" She hissed. her eyes softened. "Anyway, yes you can sleep by Snowpaw-"
"Thankyou!" Twistedpaw gave Sparklepaws ear a quick lick.
    "Sparklepaw snuggled up closer to Kitpaw who was sleeping.


    Sparklepaw felt someone Prodding her with a paw. She looked up. "Oh, Hi Kitpaw!" She scrambled up and padded up with him.
"Hungry?" Kitpaw meowed passing a Blackbird toward Sparklepaw.
"Are you kidding?" She teased and took a bite. She passed it toward Kitpaw and shared it with him. She noticed Twistedpaw with Snowpaw. She felt a bump ageinst her leg and saw the half-eaten blackbird. "Not hungry..." She murmured and walked toward the entrance of the Warrior den. Sparklepaw started grooming herself on her chest. She soon heard pawsteps and looked up to see Thunderfoot. "Good morning Thunderfoot. What are we doing today?"
"I'm going to teach you how to hunt mice-"
"Done. I saw Icewhisker teaching Frostpaw how to hunt mice."
    Icewhisker was Frostpaw mentor and they shared a strangely strong bond. 
"Er... Bird-"
"Done."
"Rabbit?"
"Done."
"Um... Squirrle?"
"Done."
"Okay, just catch as much as you can carry, okay?"
"Al righty!" (what is this mary-sue shit that stemmed straight from me being too lazy to write how to catch things)

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wow i didnt actually realize that was the end of the chapter
ok so i think next chapter things are going to start picking up?? i mean i honestly have no clue i havent read this in years
so this was mainly just a filler chapter, but be back tomorrow for more ((((((;;

W O W im so sorry for how long ive deprived you guys of this masterpiece
(side note i accidentally typed "you gays" and honestly true)
anyways here's the fourth chapter i guess

Chapter #4

Sparklepaw had cought so much she had to stop acationly to pick up any that fell. (excuse me as i cry) She raced through the undergrowth and bunped into a rock and droped all her fresh-kill.
"Sparklepaw? Sparklepaw!" A voice meowed.
"Is the rock speaking to me?" Sparklepaw asked dizly. She looked up and gasped. Frostpaw!
    "Sparklepaw I have to tell you something!" Frostpaw meowed." I didn't get captured by twolegs! I ran away! I gave up my clan life to be a kittypet! And I have some messeges." She turned toward Sparklepaw. "Sparklepaw, you've always been like a sister to me. Tell Grasspaw even if we are Crookedstars kits, we shall be generous and greatd. And I'll never forget him. Te... Tell Icewhisker I'll always love him. Oh, and one more thing." She bent closser to her ear. "Grasspaw loves you." (im crying)


Sparklepaw had told Icewhisker and left him silently weepingly Frostpaw's beding, so now Grasspaw was left. She saw him sun bathing with bits of rabbit bones by him. "Grasspaw," She started, and hesitated. He looked up. "You see, Frostpaw ran away to be a kitty-pet. She said "Grasspaw, even if we are Crookedstars kits, we shall be generous and great. And she'll never forget you."
Suddenly, Grasspaw burst into tears! "Oh, Sparklepaw! I've lost everything! my mother," who died in battle, "My father, and now my sister!" He weeped.
Sparklepaw gently toched his nose. "No, you haven't lost everything." She murmured. "You haven't lost me."
"Hey, Sparklepaw! You gotta see this!" I was Kitpaw.
"Can I come?" Asked Grasspaw.
"Er, I think it's best for you to stay here." Sparklepaw replied. She dashed after Kitpaw through the woods. The trees suddenly parted, revealing a beutiful golden medow. "It's gorgious!" Sparklepaw gasped. "Hey, look! Marigold!" She and Kitpaw grabbed as much as they could carry.
Sparklepaw was about to turn and stalk of but she noticed Kitpaw wasn't with her. "Kitpaw?" She turned to see him pounce on a mouse.
"Let's hunt!" He meowed.


When they got back, Their mouthes were full of marigold stems and fresh-kill.
"What's this? Marigold! We havn't seen that in so long!" Moon exclaimed. Raven touched her shoulder with his tail to silence her.
"What's this? How did you get all that?" Asked Oakpelt. Kitkit poured out all detail about the medow.
"Let's claim it at the gathering!" He finished. Oakpelt nodded and jumped on the Highrock.
"As we all know," He started. "Tonight is the gathering. The Worriors are: Thunderfoot, Lightningcoat, Shallowfeet, Barkface and Lionmane." Lionpaw's a Worrior! Thought Sparklepaw.
"Apprentices are: Sparklepaw, Kitpaw, Grasspaw and Whiskerpaw."
"Whiskerkit's an Apprentice?" Kitpaw whispered in discust.
"Hey, at least we got picked." Sparklepaw whispered back.
"Moon, Specklednose seems to be suffuring. Please stay here. But Thunderclan needs a back-up deputy. (wtf Moon was the medi-cat apprentice what's happening) Thunderfoot." Thunderfoot dipped his head like a new deputys would. Something stabbed Sparklepaw's heart. There were many more expereanced Warriors, yet Oakpelt chose Thunderfoot? Thunderfoot hurried to his leaders side, and they set out.

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well that was chapter 4
next chapter we get to see the gathering!! so that's cool i guess
i swear to god this entire fic feels like a fever dream
anyways hope you guys enjoy =')))